Well this is melody's story
Ill start by saying sorry now for any spelling or grammer in this thats wrong but hey I'm normally an artist you know LOL
This story is something that melody has found extremely hard to deal with and for along while was a very closed person. Riot luckily over time brought her out of her shell and helped her find herself again. She wants revenge for her mothers death and try and bring back her father or if need be kill him, cause to her as it stands he is dead to her. She wants answers, like who was the figure in the smoke???
I know its a sad story but everyone can't be happy all the time and I thought bringing Roboticizing into was a nice touch something I use to love in the old cartoons but this world they live in is huge and this is only one region where its become a huge problem but surely it could spread?
Please guys let me know what you think and be kind writing is something I'm not to strong at and is normally what si is best at. LOL
Also did you like the touches at the beginning about the meaning of there names.
anyways enjoy and feedback feedback feedback